"you tell me I'm the best
but water just fills my eyes
because I know everything you have said
is nothing all but lies"
that's my fave line!

Good poem! Your really talented. Keep it up!

thats a loong poem..but its really good and its tru u dont need him..u'll always find someone better

Very long! Haha, but it was really good and sweet. Your rhyming is awesome.

Well, it's one of the best poem i've ever read to....although...it's really very very looooong...and since you write this quite sometime ago...why don't you read it again...maybe it will help you...how are you doing by the way...i hope you are not cutting anymore...okey...

Luv ya...jane...@;---

Haha...I came back and read it again...like I said before...this is good...

This is probably one of my favorite poems you have written! It is excellent!!

This is probably one of my favorite poems as well! I really like it. You're an amazing writer. keep it up!