i like this poem i like the end bit well done 5/5 !!!!! xxx

What a neat ending! It is so simple and elastic - how devilous and critically outspoken the last stanza is! My how I enjoy your ... pessimistic provoking themes.

Very, very good! - However political you are; liberal or conservative.

5/5

I really love your work, it's refreshingly blunt

you'll forever be my inspiration, hero, and saviour...i love you...i miss you...

-ish