That is sooooo good!

beautiful poem, i'm sorry for your loss.keep writing though, you have talent:) xx

ver touching, you guys must have been really close.***I would appreciate your opinion on my stuff as well, thanks!!

I'm sorry for your loss. it almost made me cry, specially because i've got a very strong bond with my grandmother. I know your grandma is so proud of you and that she's with u always. You've got great works, keep 'em up. if u wanna, u can check my stuff..
bye! take care
. . . p i l i

Xx...hey this is amazing, im woried about my granda at the minute..she has cancer so i dnt no how long shel be here..i feel sorry for u i love my grandma an i bet u loved urs too..hope ur ok....katy....xX

aww that is so sweet..I know exactly how you feel. I lost my grandma not even a year ago..I did the same thing you did. I wrote a poem in dedication to her and I read it at her funeral..Please read it and comment on it..it is called it was her time to go..please it would mean alot..I want you to know that that poem was awesome.You did good at writing it and I am sure your grandma is lookin down on you and is so very very proud of you..You did a great job..But remember I know how you feel and if you need me you can email me. If you want to email me comment on my poem and let me know and I will give you my email addy..I will be there for you because I know what you are goin through and I love to try and help people with their problems..Great job. 5/5..xoxo..Crystal

Excellent! That was awesome. I'm sorry for your loss. I hope everything works out! I loved it! Keep up the good work!
- <3 - Kelsey

Great poem. I loved it.

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Hey alli its a good poem I know how you feel my grandma past away this year.

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wow.... I'm so sorry about ur grandma... i'm sure that she loves u to and will always have u in her heart...I know da pain that u r going through.... I lost ma twin brother.... I really have to gie u props cuz readin that on her funeral took a lot of guts i couldnt even go on ma brothers...Well i wanan wish u good luck and tell u that ur grandma loves u and is watchin over u day n nite...mwahzzz

Hey.. nice poem I love it! :) I like writing too. I write lyrics.