I loved the structure and flow in this poem! Really well done hun :D the name is fine, but perhaps "Simple Misunderstandings" ?? speak to you soon, from kane

i love how it flowed so nicely!! i know how that feels!! great poem!!! 5/5!!!

great poem! i liked the style of it all! sorry no suggestions!

~dAisY~

amazing poem, i always write poems to get my feelings out! awesome job!

You did good on this, yeh your title is fine sweetie. I often can't find good titles on my things because there's so many possibilities. Oh if you can go check out my newest song.

well here are some suggestions on the tittle but i like it as is.
You forgot
You Forgot it All
Unclamed fears
Up All Night.
Those are just some suggestions but i like the tittle anyways great job with the poem I truly loved reading it. I can relate to the topic because me and my Ex b/f used to fight all the time. But then we finally broke up because I got tired of fighting lol. Anyways great job. I loved reading it. Seemed effortless to write for you. But your very talented writer keep up the great work. I am adding you to my favorites. xoxox Britney xoxox
By the way overall all your poems was def. a 5!

wow.. that was a really good poem.. and the title.. fits it. dont change it. its good. keep up all the good work. and by the way your best poems come from real experiences. keep up the good work. and if he put you through some hell.. dont stay around you deserve better... anyways, keep up the good work....

~*~Ashley~*~