thank you for commenting on my poem! and i really like this poem of yours! i can really relate to it! keep up the good work! and like you told me....god is always on your side! weather you can see his good work or not! cuz i have been through alot of shit in my life too! but...when i started to believe in god...alot of the shit went away! because then i had someone to count on! cuz if no one in your life will be there for you...God will be! i promise!!

leanna

great poem! i love it! really amazing! sad...but so sweet! o and if u want advice just write from the heart that's the way to write the best poems! keep it up!

Love, Taylor