You described feelings in a unique way. I feel you made it different from the norm using your own style. Very well written! Take Care! Brooke~

o.. this is wonderful.. true, its sad.. but thats wer its beauty lies.. i lyk ur rhyme scheme..
keep up the talent

Wow...That was amazing...Great description! I could see the glass..kinda scary, but great! 5/5!

beautiful write girl, different write than other, so unique style written, awesome!

Great piece of writing I like how you kept every line short and snappy helping the poem to flow easier keep it up!

take care

great poem good job i love it.

aw, so sad.... is this poem like about being trapped in depression and not being able to esape? 5/5

I have read some of your poems before.. and this one like many others of yours is amazing!! i really liked it.. bye bye EJ

You have a unique style and I think your a great writer.

wow very different..lol...i like it...kinda freaky though..for some odd reason it reminds me of the grudge..lol...dont know why though anyway great poem...plz check out mine...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I liked the poem alot, but I kinda feel you should devide it up a little, but even though it wasn't "cut up" (not sure what it's called in english, sorry), it was still very very good:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

Original, and some great words, a bit confusing but i enjoyted your idea and personal structure. Keep Writing.

I love the feelin u put into this poem, its amazing. U have good techniques and great tactics which makes u a great writing...5/5

very good, some of the rhymes seemed a little forced..but maybe thats just me..i gave you a 5/5 anyways

Wow awesome. very unique. I liked the imagery and your rhyme scheme. THe thing i liked most about ti was the ending though it tied it all together! great job!

sort of sad, but i like

Wow.. this was so dark and deep.. i lykd the emotion in it and the imagery u used..
keep it ups

Wow very deep and emotional. the rhyming was good except it sounded like you forced some words to rhyme.