by [п]єєÑнап*томι Jul 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
From this day forward I regret the day we met, |
by Jesse Ray
well, thank you for commenting on my poem. I see that you're filipino too, do you speak tagalog? The poem was really nice and clean. I think you can add a verse or two explaining what happened. Other than that, I like the ending and how it can fit on either side of the poem. |
that was wonderful... i can feel you.. actually, i can really relate to that.. |