by Cathryn
Love it sooo much! I can totally relate to this poem! |
by Keath
Wonderful. It has so much emotion in it and it’s also very realistic. It seems familiar to me. I like the rhythm, the story and especially the last sentence. Bravo! 5/5 |
by Mousie
Omg, it's uncanny how much i can relate to this poem! i don't have problems at home and stuff, i'm not some little problem child, but there are so many problems and things i have going on inside of me that i never let out. as i read this, i knew it was exactly how i feel and you conveyed it really well... wonderful! 5/5 |
Wow I love this poem =) I like the way you end it 5/5 |