i really like this poem... it's a little all over the place, but it works. i thinki it's an awesome poem, and for the title, out of the ones you had i think remorse is the best.. just simple because it's a fairly complicated poem. awesome work!
take care.
xoxo

Please tell me this could be a song, cuz I'd love to hear it to music.

I really loved this, it flowed so great and I loved the whole theme (even tho I partially didnt understand it, just cuz this poem means so much in my eyes).

Excellent, beautiful, amazing! (and I never put those 3 words together, so take that as a compliment)

*sigh*
you have a very thoughtful mind..

Very good poem I am gonna read some more of your works. {:^)~

Is this a song? It's still very good either way. My favourite line is:

"Raindrops will never soak your hair nor cover your tears"

It was indeed a wonder read.

Keep it up M'Darling.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Yes it seems kinda song! But really a nice poem! I liked it!

Is it about an abortion because thats kinda what it sounds like. Its really good!

Light will never enter your eyes
Warmth will never touch your flesh nor fill your heart
Raindrops will never soak your hair nor cover your tears

that stanza is amazing i like it. u hav sum serious talent keep it up

Wow, I dunno what to say, very moving.

I think i can relate to similar situations if it was ment as i took it but either way it was still good take it easy

Because…
You will never be
You cannot hear
You cannot see
You simply cannot be

love this line keep it up, i love your work, i wrote that poem and submitted it, its called Tims Game, check it out plz

Awww thats really sad, i loved the ending of it, i understand the pain in this poem, great work

~**Lucy**~

I love this poem.. I do I do.. Lol.
It was great.

You know when you read something, you get an image or you get a person into your mind as you continue to read? Or maybe that's just me.
But yeah, that keeps happening. Love the poems though. You're such a great writer.

I really like this poem.... it kind of has that debating theme of whose fault is it.... its a poem that can be taken different ways.... so with the controversy in your work i would leave the title of unknowable apology smiply because you dont really knows whose fault it is so you dont really know who is or even who should apologize