Patrik thank you for taking the time to look at my poems it was greatly appreciated. This poem was quite a serious subject and just from reading the words I think maybe you had someone close go through this ......... I think you wrote a lovely poem with a lot of feeling and heart even though it was a sore subject.

take care Lisa

Oh what a lovely poem (of course the friends problems are not lovely) erm one thing tho, this bit - 'He's your father but I won't care,
If he hits you again I'll set off like a flare.' Doesnt flow like the rest of it