by Mandy Lou Jul 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I'm tired of being restricted |
kind of gorey....but it was still a cool poem and its good that, that poem isnt true! oh yah... and i liked it!! |
by Britney
well i'm glad thats not true because that mite be a little crazy lol, anyways great job! your rhymes seemed forced in some areas but it was still perfevtly fine! I loved it and enjoyed reading it. I still gave it a 5 though becuase i thought the emotion you put into was great! anyways great job. xox |
by Andrea
dang girl, you got it goin on. your poems are so awesome. they have a great flow and the rhyming is perfect |
by SuperJenius
AwsoMe |
by Tarikins
Excellent. |