woah....damn....this was really good you r very talented i loved the rhyming it flowed so nicley .....i felt alot of agression....5/5

5/5 great job...keep up the good work

Wow... Intense poem! But beautifully portrayed, well done! Excellent poem, from Kane

amazing!!!!

Excellent.

AwsoMe
very well written
~HazE

dang girl, you got it goin on. your poems are so awesome. they have a great flow and the rhyming is perfect

well i'm glad thats not true because that mite be a little crazy lol, anyways great job! your rhymes seemed forced in some areas but it was still perfevtly fine! I loved it and enjoyed reading it. I still gave it a 5 though becuase i thought the emotion you put into was great! anyways great job. xox

kind of gorey....but it was still a cool poem and its good that, that poem isnt true! oh yah... and i liked it!!
~*~Ashley~*~