Breakdown

by ruth   Jul 27, 2005


Look into my eyes...
See gloomy days and darker skies
In my world the sun won't rise
There are no hello's, just good-bye's
Gone are the smiles, left are the sighs
I'm searching for truth, finding only lies
With each passing moment my life unwinds, unties
See my tears
Hear my cries
Feel my heart
As it dies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Short, very good flow.
    An enjoyable read.
    Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that is really sad. and I could definitely relate to this. You did a great job on this. and it's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. Great job on this!

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved the flow and the wording. Its just amazing. All your poems are very nicely written. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    Ruth! You are amazing! Just keep it up! If you get a chance just check out my poems. Your comment would be very valuable.

  • 19 years ago

    by .

    wow..that was really good! short but gets the point across! 5/5 Loved it! Keep it up!
    Thanks for the comment
    Becky

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