short but wow great poem. i loved the lines "In my world the sun won't rise
No hello's, just good-bye's".... pure genious. keep up the good work.

i like you're writing style. its short yet gets the job done. great poem

you can read some of my work if and when you please to do so..

wow..that was really good! short but gets the point across! 5/5 Loved it! Keep it up!
Thanks for the comment
Becky

Ruth! You are amazing! Just keep it up! If you get a chance just check out my poems. Your comment would be very valuable.

I loved the flow and the wording. Its just amazing. All your poems are very nicely written. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

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Aww.. that is really sad. and I could definitely relate to this. You did a great job on this. and it's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. Great job on this!

Great poem.
Short, very good flow.
An enjoyable read.
Take care