Rush

by ruth   Jul 27, 2005


Two people walk by each other
and their shoulders brush.
Neither turns to say they are sorry
both are in a rush.
A love that could have been,
but not given the time to start.
Because both did not listen
to the whisper of the heart.

Copyright 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow this is short, simple and yet so deep, beautiful poem indeed

    all the best and take care

    btw: - dont u write anymore??

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    very short but very nicely written!

  • 19 years ago

    by kiesha

    Wow. That's really good. It's very thought provoking. Keep writing. Take care and God bless.

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very nice. I often wonder what would happen if i choose a different path. How it would lead my life. Who i would get to know and who i wouldnt. Very short yet to the point and never faltering in rhythm. A very nice read, thanks for the comment on mine by the way :)
    -A

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