sorry to hear about you being alone but be strong your time will surely come, Good job

-Josiah

I really liked the poem...Umm..I don't think that the last part really fits though...You're talking about being without HIM then, it's just when you're ALONE at all...it's a contradiction...just my opinion...

great poem 5/5

love mark xxx

I love ur poem! U r really good keep it up. 5/5

Its good but i like the part 2 better

This is reli sad and heartfelt.. its short, but u got ur point across.. i loved the rhyme scheme, and ur flow was almost perfect.. i mostly liked ur last two lines; they summed up the whole poem for me, and i cud feel the hurt and pain u were in.. very sincere and honest..
loved it.. im so sorry for ur loss
take good care
thnx bunches for ur comment
NannO

So short but very sad. 5/5, Em