This is the first poem in a long time that honestly made me cry.. Remembering how stupid I was trying to commit suicide and how I looked to other people... Sad thing is, still feel like that. At the begining there seemd to be forced rhyme, that didn't flow in with the rest of the poem. If there was rhyme at the end I didn't notice because it was written so powerfully. Poems like this are oftenly called "cliche" because there's way too many of them, but this one is extremely good.. And like any other, alot better than my stuff -_-

/: Shadow--Stalker :\

Sorry, decided to make another one because you edited it = D I believe that it changed it for the better, a much better poem.. now if only I could remember how to rate, haha.

/: Shadow--Stalker :\