by William Flores Jul 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Next to a shattered window, sitting all day |
by ruth
really touching. i live it |
by Marjan
very sad and touching poem william. |
the reason why i only gave you a 4 is this.... the poem doesnt appeal to me for some reason.. its good, ill give you that.. but the rhyming is getting to me for some reason... i tend not to rhyme, so i tend not to like rhymes.. so maybe im just different but thats just me, keep up the good work... this seems like a poem from your heart or somewhere close so dont take what ive said too seriously... or serious at all |
by Lecrissa
This is a well writen poem. Its is so full of saddness and lack of hope it screems at you. |
by suzanne
aww that poem was really good. |