Darling

by Absinth Eyes   Jul 27, 2005


Darling can't you see by now
How everything slowly fades
The lost are so quick to drown
In emotionless escapades

Darling love's just not enough
To keep us both around
No matter how much I act tough
My screams echo without sound

Darling you just never cared
Enough to make this work
You never trusted me on my own
Behind the many hollow words

Darling I just couldn't take
How I knew what you were up to
How you told them I was a big mistake
After you told me I completed you

Darling you broke my virgin heart
That had never known love before
You kept yourself hidden from the start
And I don't think I'm who you adore

Darling here's a little note
And it's sealed with a bittersweet kiss
I could never live with or without you
My love and my blood from my wrist

So darling this is my goodbye
I'll never see you again
I'm turning this cold blade warm with crimson
Making sure this hurt comes to an end

~~This is really more of a song... I'd love to do this on acoustic.~~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Aww! that was so touchy and great emotions. the words seems really very well express. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    Beautiful penned piece it really pulls at the heartstrings. your very talented gunna read more of ur poems. great job 5/5. if u have time check out some of my work please xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    *Claps* Loveeeeeeeeeee ^^ keep it up, stay strong *hugs* keep writing, its got and "aweing" sense to it...(not the awwww thats ao cute but amazment you know? )

    Love
    Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    :) I was thinking it could be a song...I sang it as I read it...I love it! It's beautiful and full of heartbreak...wonderfully written!

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I guessed the ending but it was still VERY sad!

    "Darling I just couldn't take
    How I knew what you were up to
    How you told them I was a big mistake
    After you told me I completed you" i would have to say my favorite part of it. this is very well writen and realistic. i have heard of stories of people losing thier first love and killing themself afterwards, it's sad to hear about them but it does happen. again wonderful peice you got the emotion through .

    ~Jacklyn

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