i love this poem! i read it like 4 times. good job! keep wirting. check out some of my stuff sometime!5/5
<3vanna

Very nice. There are so few really talented poets on this site anymore. I'm glad it's getting a new one. :)
-A

wow hun this rocks your really gd xox

WHOA! I am so impressed I'm speechless!! I mean I really don't know what to say but please don't stop writing to would be wasting a heck of a lot of talent!!
~Chelsey~

i love this poem ! its so good ive been reading your other poems and their good also. keep it up i think thier fab!

very good and creative. i would love ur opinion on my stuff as well

nice poem you did a great job it is very expressive.

really good. love the way it flows. swoosh... okay. likkle crazy here.
No. really, great poem. lol.

Lv A, x

wicked poem
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Amazing poem, thanks for commenting on mine too:) I think its so awesome you have your own band and you are the lead singer/songwriter and guitarist. I too, have my own band and am the lead singer/songwriter and guitarist! Also, do you have msn, if you do, mine is bernesemountaindog@msn.com

Ana*

I guessed the ending but it was still VERY sad!

"Darling I just couldn't take
How I knew what you were up to
How you told them I was a big mistake
After you told me I completed you" i would have to say my favorite part of it. this is very well writen and realistic. i have heard of stories of people losing thier first love and killing themself afterwards, it's sad to hear about them but it does happen. again wonderful peice you got the emotion through .

~Jacklyn

:) I was thinking it could be a song...I sang it as I read it...I love it! It's beautiful and full of heartbreak...wonderfully written!

xxx

*Claps* Loveeeeeeeeeee ^^ keep it up, stay strong *hugs* keep writing, its got and "aweing" sense to it...(not the awwww thats ao cute but amazment you know? )

Love
Jenn

Beautiful penned piece it really pulls at the heartstrings. your very talented gunna read more of ur poems. great job 5/5. if u have time check out some of my work please xxxx

Aww! that was so touchy and great emotions. the words seems really very well express. 5/5