That's great! It's so true...People tell you that they love you but they don't know what's going on "Behind your eyes" Great write..could really relate!

Your poetry has taken a sadden turn! I hope all is well with you. This poem was written so beautifully, but so depressing at the same time. I am a big fan of your work, so keep on writing and stay positive. You would be surprised how much the ones you think don’t care really do. A lot of times people will not see your pain if it’s kept locked up. Take Care! Brooke~

P.S. I liked your previous name a lot better.

Very original and deserving of a five. Excellent.

wow neato poem, angel poems, always catch my interest

excellent poem. it should awesome emotion. i liked it alot

A great poem, displaying such emotion, and making me (the reader) feel a sense of need to help, but knowing that I can't. Such a great poem. Sorry it took me a while to comment on one of yours, I was just very busy with work and other stuff.

Hi, i really like this poem You put so much emotions in it and it really touches me
I enjoy reading it
And ofcourse i give you a 5 for this great poem
Keep up the good work

Wow..we have alot in common! lol we seriously do, you have written similar to what i have written about, its great!! seriously! your poems deserve SOOO much more then you're getting!! 5/5!

Awwww... don't give up... i know how you feel... feel free to read sum of my poems, too... hopefully, you can relate to sum!

hugs,

Michelle

I loved this one.

This is a beautiful poem. also quite sad. but it was veyr emotional and it feels good to them all out. you did a good job at doing that. you got your message across. i loved the title, very creative. i simply loved this poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.