by Kelsey Jul 28, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Everyday I contemplate |
by bucky
wow this poem is amazing ... some word i didn't understand but i got the just of things ... how u thought to come up with this amazes me ... well done 10/5 if possible |
by Lisa
wow, I love the wording, the emotion, the thought that you put into this poem.. It's so different and yet so wonderful, I read it twice, and each time I enjoyed it more.. good job. |
by Kayla
I think it was a little long and i suggest to make it cleaner that you spearate your stanzas instead of having a big clump but besides that nice job..i had trouble following but overall nice work...:) luv yas mwah |
by NannO
that was reli deep.. i loved the way u conveyed ur message out on paper.. and even tho ther was no rhyme, ur piece had a music of its own.. i lyk the way it sounded as if it's thoughts out loud.. |
by Samantha
Very interesting idea. You definitely wrote this poem in a refreshing and unique way, and I have to say it made me think. I like it a lot. |