by TragicRomance Jul 28, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
It really, really made me sad, |
by Jamie
Once again GREAT FLOW rhymes seemed as if you speak fluent rhyme *i dont know lol* but you need a better vocab it would make these poems that much greater and they are already at 5/5 level good job |
by lisa
great poem...i can relate in some ways.....5/5 |
by skyfox
great work! The sentiment rings true for a lot of gone bad relationships |
by *NiCoLe*
Wow felicia this is really good...who's it about?? well anyways great poem keep it up gurlie!!! 5/5 |