Hey Aaron,
I think we've all been there! I sure have. Keep writing and don't give up on hope
Love ya always
Kala

hey good job,
i liked how u wrote it like u r weak from this awful realationship but r still strong enough to stand up and say that u don't deseve it. ur right, nobody deserves that, so be all u can be, oh an never stop writing, ur very good.
hugs and kisses
*rach*

Its great how you put it all together you can kinda read what ur feeling its kewl.... i really should sort out my problem of saying kewl alot lol c ya xox

Wow... That's deep Aaron! Awesome job 5/5!!!!!!!!

Good poem i like it

I LOVED THAT POEM!!!...U R A GREAT WRITER!!!...THAT ALMOST MADE ME CRY!!!!...

I almost cried... great poem 5/5

That kinda made me cry jus a lil bit tho
umm great **Rubs eyes** luv ya lots bye

Wow i really like your poem and how u sort of used the "rain rain go away" theme to it.. or atleast thats what i thought... none the less it was great and had good meening. i can relate, ccause i always just get treated like a booty call or a rebound.. i hate it .. and no one deserves it ... pleae comment on my poem Last first Kiss