OmIgOsH tHiS wAs AnOtHeR aWeSoMe PoEm!!!
YoU hAvE tAlEnT cHiKa!
eLiZaBeTh

wow ur 13??? well, u have words of wisdom girl!!! Stay Strong... 5/5... keep up the good work, thanks for the comment on my poem.
always
michelle

wow that was awsome loved that. thanks for the comment glad u liked it

Aw this is really sad hun, is there a particular reason why you wrote it?:( Great description used throughout, again, short but sweet:)

Ana*

ur a very powerful writer who knows how to use her words...keep up the great work...loved it!

healing_wounds

again short but has so much meaning...you really know how to write what you feel and how to put it in words that mean alot..it like they say a picture can mean 1000 words..well the words that you use can also mean 1000 different meaning

kaylee

Very good. Short but sweet. Good work

"How can it be called life,
If all i look forward to is dying?"
I love thatpart the best, i hope you get though these times, life does suck sometimes, but sometimes its rad.
Im here for a chat anytime
xox Bam