Woah.....what did the bacteria do? Did you go to like a hospital thing today or something??? Awww, that's my georgi!!! lol! I love yoouuuu!! Great job!!! I'm sooo proud of you!! :-D!!

~Sierra

WOW! This is soooo amazing and sad. I can really feel the emotions!

Much Love
~*hAiLY*~

Though the story is sad your wording is quite beautiful. Well done.

omg thats really sad and sweet of you to write a poem about her..
my heart goes out to you and yours...

It's a sad story but I'm not sure I get it. I realize she was sick but "she's sees pain in her reflection" ...she's only two? Please don't get me wrong but I won't be like everyone else and say oh awesome awesome if I don't get it. It was well written and it all sounds good I just don't understand....Email me Georgi..I really am interested in knowing...

well nat, when i played with her, she was always very vacant, and it was hard keeping her to concentrate on anything. But i took her into something called a sensory room, which is were there are lots of lights and things, different surfaces for children to play on, and lava lamps and mirrors and things. anyway she went over the mirror and she looked at herself for so long, then she kept hitting the mirror and crying and i couldnt calm her down. I just got the impression she didnt like what she saw. thats all. thankyou for ur honest opinion xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

OOOHHH wow that's terrible. Well, I sure do hope all is well now...or in the near future! Good luck!

Hope the best for Catherine,
the flow could use some adjusting, try adding some detail in the emotions
good though

I am so sorry about that! A girl just died in one of the high schools from a bacterial infection...I think it was Spinal meningitus...I hope Catherine is okay once more and that her pain fades...

this is beautiful story and shows the right emotion for the subject it is about, its really well put together. keep up the good work

well done
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u have an amazing talent huni....seriously NEVER stop.
love u xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

This poem is very sad but also very good
so how long have you been writing for