Such tangible beauty and solemn.
The flow and language is masterful.
I truly enjoyed this peice.

WOW! that is all the words that I can really get out of my mouth after reading that. You have a very unique way of rhyming words and the way you do it is so amazing and beautiful. I really loved your poem and I understand the feeling that you express inside of your poem. You have a great heart and keep up your excellent work.

Hey chicka :D

Fab work, it's awesome I really felt it. Congrats on getting onto the front page, btw! Keep it up girl!

lots of love,
Porter

Wow, you are really talented. I loved the imagery you brought across in this poem. This was a wonderful poem with beautiful lines. I especially enjoyed the last stanzas. You are a great writer. I absolutely loved this poem. Keep up the great job. Keep writing and never give up. Keep your head up. Peace. 5/5

Jesus! That was amazing! This poem was so0o0 empowering!! OMG I'm actually lost for words! All I know is that I've been there before and that's why I think I liked this poem a lot..mostly because I can relate...I'm so sorry that you feel this way and you've lost someone dear to you....I think that hurts more then anything. This poem deserves a number way higher then five!!..but thats that you get frome me! great job expressing your feelings!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

totally good stuff

I would try to critise but I cant find anything wrong with that poem..really amazing images..very powerful writing...keep it up...stay strong
xxxxxxx

Pretty hard to understand. I had to read it a few times to undrestand what you were talking about. But hey, I'm only 12. Well once I figured out what you meant, it really made sense. - Y.M