My scars

by Mŀ©ЙЄŁŁЄ   Jul 28, 2005


These scars i have left,
are Oh so deep,
its like a theft,
that forever you keep,

i felt it slice,
into my arm,
i paid the price,
for the people i harm,

i never meant,
to hurt the ones i love,
i guess i spent,
too much time in the clouds above,

i never thought,
i would cause so much pain,
i fought and fought,
to run away from the blame,

this arm of mine,
will be scared for life,
is it the end of the line,
cos i used the knife?

*michelle*
plz rate and comment this poem means alot to me, i'll always repay the favour. thx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, I really really like this poem. It's so good. I know how you feel, I can relate to it soo well. Everytime I read something like this it brings chills to my spine, because it's a part of my past I'm trying to forget. And since that isn't exactly happening, I just face that type of thing head on! Great Job. =)

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I like it. You did a nice job with alternating rhyme scemes (ABAB). Keep up the good work 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××

    Wow. brilliant poem 5/5 for sure... thanks heaps for the comment on my poem its very much appreciated. i now have you on my favourites so ill be able to check out more of your poems ('',) take care...hope your ok xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Xxs0phxX

    Hey
    well done grate work
    keep it up
    l0ve s0ph
    p.s. take a look at some of my work

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky

    wow this poem is amazing i know how it is i hvae written simislar poems you never meant to hurt anyone else you were just trying to help yourself
    lots of love
    ☼Becky☼

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