Omg i love this poem it is briallant so much emotion so much pain and it feels as if you are there and i think you have written very well keep it up
Emma

this poem was really something else so much power... and emotions wow!!!keep the great work up

awesome poem. i liked the way it flowed. it also had great emotion. awesome awesome job

wow i like it alot. very emotional. I think it was a great idea and it draws you in from the first few lines good job:)

wow omg speachless, awsome write I'm putting you in my favs your so incredibly talented hun keep it up!

love always

Natalie

Wowsers what a great poem i really really liked this... simply amazing how we can tie something as simple as patterns in the snow to somthing so amazing and painful but beautiful as love... just amazing! comment on some of mine when u get the chance keep up the good work! Katie

holy crap i could actually feel like i was 'in' this poem. it was really moving. i LOVED it. please write more like this...

wow... that is really emotional, i like it. its sad but beautiful. it really does feel like you are there. keep on writing!

kate

WOW, this was truely amazing, very emotional and deep....damn I relate so much!!!! Great poem, I L-O-V-E it =0)

*HUgs sabrina*

welcome to the club

I am absolutely speechless, it was a beautiful yet hurtful poem and it felt as if i was there feeling that, no writer has ever done that to me..no poem has ever made me feel this way.. your such a brilliant writer dont ever give up o9n your dreams.. dont stop writing..

Great!! thanks for commenting... why do u write sad poems.. u r a young girl and u should be full of life, happiness and laughter.. spread happiness and you will be happy.. dont think of what you get but give... that is how you will derive happiness... i guess i am being didactic... thanks again.. and you can read my other poems too.. vision, paradise and child in a doll house.. thanks

That was very emotional beautiful and true, i loved it! amazing job!

Hey...this is cute...sweet...sad...touching...nice one.

Brilliant emotion, and the ending was so pure in its pain...it reminded me of the movie House of Flying Daggers, the music and feeling at the end.

-beth

Omg hunni... I hope that you're okay. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm always here okay? This is an amazing poem, but I really hope it isn't about you. Keep writing, because you're amazing at it

Wow, i am speechless.... it's such a powerful poem with so much emotion. has this been posted before because im sure i recognise it?? sorry im probably just being stupid lol, great poem, take care
Polly

This poem is so emotional
im speachless
the ending was wonderful
so unlike the rest
i felt like i was there with you
keep up the good work
xxxx

Very Good poem, with so much meaning behind it. Nice Job