Youll regret i was born

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   Jul 28, 2005


When you took away my knife
you might as well have took my life
my key to survival
held in that blade
the blood and pain
to me it gave

now I'm slowly buildin' up
all this pain and anguish
but without my dear blade
there no way to extinguish
the way i feel
its all just to real
i cant take much more of this shit

now my fears have all come true
you acted just the way i knew you would
you don't understand
though i tried to explain
the cuts that i make
are my release from this pain
this life that i live in vain

and so it will be
that you'll send me away
and try to figure out
just what made me this way
why the pain doesn't hurt
and i want to see the blood
why i seem to push away your love

but you'll never know
that hurt me so
the biggest mistake
was makin' me go
now ill never return
and though for me you'll mourn
deep down inside
you'll regret i was ever born

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerfully written peice with some very strong feelings in it. the last line, however, seems to have a few sillables too many, but it is not a major fault and does no real damage to the overall peice.

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    That was good. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent poem. i loved it. alot of emotion was put into this poem. awesome job

  • 19 years ago

    by Ben

    that was feeling good...sad, but good. it's unfortinate you feel that way (I do know how you feel), and it isnt a good feeling. I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing your feelings.

    check out mine if you would like to.

    Bye Bye
    Ben

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