that was feeling good...sad, but good. it's unfortinate you feel that way (I do know how you feel), and it isnt a good feeling. I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing your feelings.

check out mine if you would like to.

Bye Bye
Ben

excellent poem. i loved it. alot of emotion was put into this poem. awesome job

That was good. 5/5

Very powerfully written peice with some very strong feelings in it. the last line, however, seems to have a few sillables too many, but it is not a major fault and does no real damage to the overall peice.

5/5