Whoa...that seriously blew me away.
I love your poems.

Hey, i can sorta relate to this... great poem ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

this is a really good poem! i enjoyed reading this one.
But i think instead of writing "Cuz" you should write "Cause". Many people dont like slang in poetry.
Hayley-Ree xxx

AWWW!! That is so cute! I'm not sure if I'm reading this right, but, I think I can relate...All my love poems are dedicated to the same guy. He lives in Arizona and we've been together for 15 months...(if you read my pofile, I live in Ohio)

i like it. its very sweet. hopefully one day u will come out of ur shell. dont be afraid of the emotions u have inside. xxx

I definately know where you are coming from here, Im the same way, When I met my online love he and I really hit it off because we had spent 3 months talking on the phone and the computer so we had already gotten to know one another. I really like your wording and such in this poem, the flow and beat goes perfectly. Great Job