great job i lyked it! i lyke haikus but i cant rite them......oh well! 5/5 keep it up

Great haiku girl. You did it right and it made a lot of sense to the reader.
(Especially to me).

Love yah Ari <3
- Kal.

wow...thats really good...awsome job...kudos

loves it! it's nice seeing you write in these different styles, i'm learning new things :) wonderful job hun!

~PLP~ lil slam~

Lovely! I love reading and writing Haiku's. You can also try a Tanka which is a similar form as a Haiku.

Take care!

Steve

Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job

First time I've checked out your work. You have an amazing talent for words. Well done.