I Loved it very sweet .. u asked for advise well the only thing i can tell you is write from the heart no matter what someone can say if your poem is good or bad it will always be good to you that is really all that matters but when i go back and read my poems i remember that times i had ,because everything happens for a reason and i want to remember my past ..well from that heart is all i can say... xoxo crissie

Your a great writer dont stop writing i mean i write for mr not for anyone else but i love your poem and i would hate to see someone stop writing when you so good ..talk to u later bye xoxo crissie