this is very, very good. keep writing

that's great!!!! keep writing!! ur really good! XoXo, Jennifer

my dad died when i was in the fifth grade and it's good to know that i'm not alone i'm crying! my best friend's mom is an alcoholic and she beat him also. i'm sorry you have to go thru so much pain it's not fair but neither is life and i aplaud you for being this strong!

Britney

did u get all these published? id buy the book! ur incredable at all ur poems i wish i could b as great a writer as you!

Omg i love this poem i am in tears now it is the best thing i have ever read!!! i am here for you please comment me back on the only thing i have cause i havent typed in any of my poems but ill let u know when i do
luv ya
shelby schulz

OMG all i can say is WOW that poem mande me cry im in tears now....this is areally good poem....oh i was reading your profile and we have the same middle name lol but mne is spelled lyn lol just thought iw ould tell you this i am working on a poem right now and ill keepp u updated
luv always
shelby lyn

I've already commented this poem before. and it still amazes me. i can't get over how many times i've read this and still i break down. like i already told u my dad commited suicide and i'm not gonna lie, i've attempted it before. but does it really even matter anymore? i've got scars on my arms and trying to hide them is a nightmare but i get thru it. well plz comment me back. i just need some up-lifting advice from someone. plz. it'll mean a lot to me.
toni marie a.k.a. Britney