Add more to it. Tell us what the note was about and exactly how you felt about him. Tell us what your dream was....though it's good to keep the reading wanting more and wondering I think you left it too open...

Reading = reader

Sorry about that!!

i really feel wut you feel this is a really gr8 poem

this poems perfectly desribes a broken heart.. I can relate 5

better than the first one definatly... you still need to work on your style a bit.. but i see potential defiantly.... i wud comment on more butit seems u only have these two???? well whenever u get some more poems up here just hit me up.... the easiest way is to prolly just leave me a coment on a poem n tell me u got some new work.. take care.......... (n again heres another 5 hun)

*~peace and love~*

THis poem is well written...I like it alot. Its sad but most of my poems are too. I like the style of this poem. Keep up the good work.

this is also really sweet. all i would say is that you should maybe add more to it. But still, I liked it.
xxxxxxxxxxx

Good I-you poem. 5/5.

Not bad poem, better than 2nd one.

excellent poem. it showed emotion and you got right to the point

The world isn't over.

But it's not a bad poem. lol, that's the second time I've said that.

It's really not, though.

Keep writing.

a sad poem indeed ... well done though 5/5 ... i want to see some more poem from you soon as well as part 2

good poem it needs more tho cuz it just kinda ends

good poem. i can relate.

Nice job keep it up and i am really sorry i know how that feels and it hurts so much. later

Very sad hunnie. it will be alrite though. the poem was good but it ends too quickly. a little more to it and it would be great. 4/5

much love
~*hAiLy*~

The poem was a little hard to read, the flow was quite rough, but i like the concept, keep writing, every poem is better that the last.

That's so sad, I think everyone has been there one time or another in his or her life. I know I have been more than once! You express your feelings very well, and I looked forward to part 2. Brooke~

A gr8 job. i preferred ur other poem tho. keep up the good work xxx

Wow, you explained everything pretty good and everything was clear. I feel that way sometimes. Good job