I like it, but i wish it were longer. good idea for a poem and i can relate to it a lot.

I like it, but i wish it were longer. good idea for a poem and i can relate to it a lot.

U certainly convey your feelings in all the works ive read.. its pretty sad. but still id like to see some more developed work of yours.. than again,.. i know i write for myself so it prolly doesnt matter to you what i think.. o well.. not too bad,.. keep goin with ur writing.. pZ

Not you're best, the thing that coulda made this better would be rhyming, i know thats not what you do but it woulda been good for this, but still good. 4/5

I told you how i felt
and
I told you how I felt about you

are prety much the same lines....and again,this poem was so basic,there was nothing much to read...it all sounds like just a simple conversation.

This is a good poem but it also repeated its self too much keep up the good work and i will keep reading

Good ideas, very good ideas, i just think it couldve flowed a little better, still good though

Thats soo sad unrequitted love is awful

Nice and well written.

I think that this really good poem really emoational.ahh i dont i spelled that write..but great poem..5/5

Ehh it was more of a story type thing. it didnt rhyme to good and when it did there wasnt a flow. i like a poem with a good flow that i can just read thru without any problems or having to go back and re-read it. its just my opinion. dont take it as your a horrible writer.

Sounds like you're rambling about having your heart broken, but i liked it.

Real good you should add a little more to it,but it was still very good though

WoW really good i love this alot..5/5

Started off really good ...
"I told you how i felt,
You said the same about me."
and the second verse ...
"I asked you out,
You said you didn't like me "like that."
just got all choppy .. again you dif. got your point across..still a 4/5

Alot of people do that it seems. It is very sad.

I'v read so many like this it isnt even funny...if you'd make your poems longer they'd be so much more original...and interesting...4/5

Omg thats really sad.....5/5 good job
Becky
xoxo