Your first poem!!!! Thats amazing keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine - good girl your bloody great you have such talent

'You won't see a whole person, just bits and peices of me
I don't know who I am, or even who I want to be'

I really like that part. It's the most powerful bit of the poem. Good work. 5/5

this is really good, it makes me worry, but it's good!