Wow, that has a very important message. Does everybody get it?
Its a cry of help. It says "Help, help, I'm obiviously on something! Does any one realize I've completley lost it!!??" Personly i have no problems with you being...well lets just face it...weird, but that poem made no sence. But other than that good effort. For that i give you a 1/5.

Plz check out my poems and vote and comment. Thx

YoUr WhAtEvEr, JaNeAn

That was..inbteresting..

erm right... made no sense to me =S hmm well done (i think) .... how is that a dark horror poem ???
puzzeld
Abbie....

your spelling is also inbteresting to loves poisen. By the way guys if you dont reall y get the message you need to look deep inside yourselfs and pull out your spleens. Also you might wanna check your panties for cords lables etc.

"your spelling is also interesting (to loves poisen). By the way guys, if you don't really get the message you need to look deep inside yourself's and pull out your spleens. Also you might wanna check your panties for cord lables etc."

maybe you should take a grammar class. I just thought i should correct your spelling, since your getting on other peopls cases about it, because your's isn't so great either.

and maybe you should work on your poems a little bit more, because they make no sense and really aren't that great.

1/5
-Kit

yea wow i do not get it

I agree with all these people.. i love the way you write because it's totally different from all the other members on this site-- it interests me but i have trouble understanding.... what do you mean in this poem??

Dear God. It saddens me to see the human brain mutilated in such a way as all of yours, commenters. You're looking for some deeper meaning. THERE IS NO DEEPER MEANING!!! This site is full of people trying to be emotional and expressive, and failing miserably. YEeEeE HaW here is taking the piss.

Keep suppressing those feelings, YEeEeE HaW.

Oh, and to continue the chain of critisizing others' spelling and grammar, Gothic Angel, yours isn't too crash hot either.

SHUT UP don't tlk to me. I never did anything to you so keep ur words to yourself and don't critisize me. I apologized to her, so leave me alone. people have said worse, so keep it to yourself from now on. you think you know everything but u have no idea.

Yeehaw, on the disscusion board i apologized to you and i am truley sorry, something bad on the day i commented, happened, and i lost control, im sorry for wut i said, and i hope you forgive me.

but i don't apreciate mr. tito saying thoose things to me, because he doesn't know me or nething about me. and he saying stupid stuff, but the thing is i don't understand why he's the one critisizing m words, when his aren't too crash hott either, and he needs to stay out of my business.

sorry bout tht^^

but yee haw i really am sorry, and i will never ever comment like that again, im truley sorry.

-Kit

whoa, sorry. I was just being pedantic, didn't mean to hurt you. Sorry.

Hey retards u realize i write these poems for my great grand kids and they dont sleep becasue there so scarred i mean these poems are freaking scarry

I personally like your style. some make sence to me. some dont. but not eveyrhting ever makes sence lol. and ur really original, so i say keep writing and il defs keep checking ur work!