Comments : Hollywood ending

  • This is such an awesome poem, and very true..life doesn't always have happy endings, I know, but c'mon, look on the bright side, never give up on hope...

    " In life, there are no happy endings..
    because in life, there are no endings.."

    ღ Love ya, Flo

  • 19 years ago

    by ChaoticStreamOfLife

    Hey man . . . awesome poem man. I really really liked it.

    Love starts off with a high
    And always ends with a cry

    Rach

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    hey great poem..i really enjoyed it and it is always so true...lol...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by crystal

    pretty well written. some parts sounded a little forced. just let the words come to you. i still really liked it.
    crystal

  • 19 years ago

    by bucky

    wow excellent poetry ... your really good i think your doing awsome as a writer and suggest some copyrighting 5/5 as always

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. very sweet/sad. And your rite no one ever has a hollywood ending! great job with the rhyme scheme. I loved all your poems that i read.. and cannot wait to read more. Your are an excellent poet so keep up the great work. 5/5 overall!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    We all wish for that Hollywood ending but it hasn't happened for me yet. Very creative and unique idea for a poem. One thing I noticed on the second to last line "life" should be live but no big deal! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was brilliant. So true. I was thinking about this subject the other day, actually. I wish we could all have Hollywood endings, but I think everyone has some sort of problem or another in their lives. Just keep your head up and hope for the best. Take care.
    ><> Kiesha