This is such an awesome poem, and very true..life doesn't always have happy endings, I know, but c'mon, look on the bright side, never give up on hope... |
Hey man . . . awesome poem man. I really really liked it. |
by Kayla
hey great poem..i really enjoyed it and it is always so true...lol...luv yas mwah |
by crystal
pretty well written. some parts sounded a little forced. just let the words come to you. i still really liked it. |
by bucky
wow excellent poetry ... your really good i think your doing awsome as a writer and suggest some copyrighting 5/5 as always |
by Britney
Awwl.. very sweet/sad. And your rite no one ever has a hollywood ending! great job with the rhyme scheme. I loved all your poems that i read.. and cannot wait to read more. Your are an excellent poet so keep up the great work. 5/5 overall! |
by Brookeღ
We all wish for that Hollywood ending but it hasn't happened for me yet. Very creative and unique idea for a poem. One thing I noticed on the second to last line "life" should be live but no big deal! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by kiesha
That was brilliant. So true. I was thinking about this subject the other day, actually. I wish we could all have Hollywood endings, but I think everyone has some sort of problem or another in their lives. Just keep your head up and hope for the best. Take care. |