For such a young person you've certainly got a way with words, and know how to express your emotion. another wonderful poem. brilliently worded

brad

Thank you, i just write what i feel... you are now one of my favourites! and thanks for taking the time to read my stuff..

Wow this was great.......really nice job
i loved how you described every girls dream come true taken away fromthem
---its really just described exactly how i feel....im glade you can put it in such beautiful words

Hey i loved this poem, it was really deep and sadly so true for so many of us out there
You did a really great job with this piece, keep up the great work!

Awwww i really understand how u feel
im going threw it atm =[
it hurts nd i miss him as well

gud poem though, i really liked it

xxx