16 and hate this town

I got this song me and a friend are write i just needs some tips on what to name it and what you think of it so far it is not finished!

16 and i hate this town
wish i could leave and lose this frown
but I'm stuck inside this trap,
with parents, all they give is crap

don't care where just wish i was their
i gonna be a rock star drop out, f**k it,
it won't get me far, i just want it to be FAIR!!!

got the money, leave this place
don't look back with a happy face
parents r barely there
doesn't even seem like they'd care

please if you like comment and vote on this thanks lots it means a bunch to me just don't copy NE thing from this song thnx