i really like this...really like deep...
keep writing

that is great work...I was hoping to avoid reading it b/c the title suggests there may be some bloody imagery or something...but you asked, and I read it....I love the shortness, your style seems to work well.

xxx

Very harsh, but powerful. 5/5.

fix the grammar and this will be the most powerful poem you can get. It has more emotion and is painfully relative to so many people, but because poems are very meaningful, they need to mean what you imply. So to say "threw" instead of "through" sort of weakens it.

dont take my cynicality to heart.

Been there. awsome poems keep it up