Wow, i love the ryhme in this poem, even without it, the words are amazing, but the rhyme makes it all that much more enjoyable:) Great job, keep it up. Also, I would greatly appreciate it if you could check out my poems too.

Ana*

Bad place to be in,.. i hate the blame game, it gets u no where... i do think u could have taken this scapegoat concept further and extended it, but your work is your work.. good job ne way.. rhymes were right on but a bit too simple for my tastes, no worries,.. good job anyway

The only on you blame
the only ONE you blame.
how do you get the last laugh if you die?? oh, well, I like the way this is written, very captivationg, 4/5

Oo I can relate. good job 5.5