I really liked this! Great job....

This is a great poem. You never know who in the world you can trust, or who really loves you...

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Excelent poem, sounds like a shitty guy, if you want me to ill kick his ass =p, gave it a 5, if you would check out some of my new stuff

It takes TWO to have sex u fool! and if he betrayed u by being fake who are u to criticze HIM???

Nice poem....i no wot its lyk to get caught up in a fairytale....then dumped in reality with nothing to hold on to. Not good is it. But hey...we all learn from our mistakes.

MaTt