dats really good.
beautiful 5/5
- xXlostXx

This was really good. I see the message you are trying to get across. I would suggest you make this into the form of a poem and not one whole paragraph. It would make it easier to read. However, I thought this was really good. I loved the second last stanza. You did an amazing job on this one. Keep on writing, never stop. Keep your head up and good luck with your friend. Peace. 5/5

welldone fantastic poem!! very well written!
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that was incredible and i can really relate to it. 5/5. good job!

It is a really good poem... it's kinda of like the poems i write... it expresses all of your emotions, and that is a good thing... i hope you keep writing... nice poem! 5/5