Comments : I'm trying.....

  • 19 years ago

    by You Forgot Me

    That's an amazing poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Brian n Josh

    Very good poem, i really liked it alot, keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    omg i felt like that last night

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    your work is real good.
    well done xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    wonderful poem.
    I liked the way you wrote it.
    the ending was very good.
    thanks for the comment on my poem.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Brian n Josh

    Hey, this was spectatular. Different from what i usually read but i liked it o so much better. -brian

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33tLaDy

    Thanks for commenting on my poem and i like this poem its good

  • 18 years ago

    by Bibbitt CSI537

    That's sad but good. Keep writing