by Minkus Jul 29, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
This was originally written to be a song, but I've never really found a suiting tune. |
by Rachel RTVW
I like this a lot. It would sound awesome as a Rock N Roll song, of course I say that being partial to Rock...Good job as are all the others of yours I have read so far. Keep up the good work! |
by Daze
Wow, man this is sooooo good, i absoloutly love this poem, your writing is so good, it is so good as a poem but i wouldn't mind hearing it as a song, this poem was good, i love your friendship poems a lot, 5/5 |
by Andrea
it kinda seemed like its a song. if not you should consider it. 5/5 |
by Kayla
I don't quite get the meaning of this poem...i might just be slow but i read it 3 times and i cant seem to grasp what the meaning is....sorry!!! luv yas mwah |
by Lithium
love it well done, it reminds me of a stucture for song lyrics :) xox fallen |