wow! i thought the poem was great. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

great work5

Have you thought about adding a little music to it? I love the wording and the flow!

Hey,
Great Poem, Loved it lots
~Smile Always~
Love Ya Bunches,
Gina

WHOA! Wasn't that a kick in the face? This poem was beutiful and so well written! It's a shame though that the person your writing about had to do whatever she/he has done..I've lost friends and been in situations like this and it hurts...but your so right...not only some things will never change...but some people never will either...I hope you stay strong and realize you must have made the right choice! Wonderful job..you got a five from me!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

This is a great poem and I really liked the repitition! Great write!

love it well done, it reminds me of a stucture for song lyrics :) xox fallen

I don't quite get the meaning of this poem...i might just be slow but i read it 3 times and i cant seem to grasp what the meaning is....sorry!!! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

it kinda seemed like its a song. if not you should consider it. 5/5

Wow, man this is sooooo good, i absoloutly love this poem, your writing is so good, it is so good as a poem but i wouldn't mind hearing it as a song, this poem was good, i love your friendship poems a lot, 5/5

I like this a lot. It would sound awesome as a Rock N Roll song, of course I say that being partial to Rock...Good job as are all the others of yours I have read so far. Keep up the good work!