This is really good, i think i can relate xxxx

hey, good poem. i dont really know what to say, but nice work, keep it up
bye bye
Ben

I don't dig this Kaitlin. It reads to me like you are still totally caught up in the swell of this piece..and have not the emotional or mental distance to make this idea a good piece of writing.

It has all the ingridients.

Good job, I liked your choice of rhyming and the words you chose, you did a good job, i liked it alot, 5/5